REAR WINDOW
1954
Alfred Hitchcock
112 minutes
Some terms:
WHACK PART
First you need as idea (hard part). Then you need to develop it and support it.
You need to build a paper like a trial or a mystery solution. In Rear Window Jeffries has to convince B(D)oyle of what he suspects. How does Boyle destroy his arguments even if Jeffries is right. (In the films this goes on between Lisa and Jeffries as well)
Watch out for sentence fragments and run on sentences.
Sentences require a subject (understood in commands) and a main verb (agrees with subject) as a minimum.
Commands may be a single word “Look!” (subject “you” understood)
“He went” Anything without those two parts will be incomplete as a declarative sentence.
In art forms (not academic papers) it may be that one can "play" with the rules to make interesting artistic points, but this is generally avoided in technical writing.
When you first write an idea down as a sentence you are forced to deal with specific words. They can/may be rather jumbled which is fine as long as they let you remember what you were trying to say. In the rewrites they must become less and less jumbled and less and less ambiguous.
Some legal problems in interpretation of law for example, with distribution of adjectives. Do they distribute across a conjunction?
What is the meaning of:
Last time we talked about films from plays:
Plays lack cuts, changes in distance between subjects and audience (no close-ups), editing, the ability to have many locations and to focus attention in the same way films do. They can play with lighting and sound
Plays have element of “immediacy” of audience involvement apparent to actors. Often able to deal with less real appearance. Odd light changes in stage performance of South Pacific were mimicked by film with disastrous results.
Inherit the Wind makes use of many of these uniquely film techniques in the film. Deep focus (without rack focus) makes depth a function of time. Nay shots of Brady responding to things Hornbeck says and so on.
Film moves outdoors more dramatically (opening sequence), sequences when Brady arrives and when Drummond walks through carnival like atmosphere. The scene at the revival meeting feels very much like the play.
This time we are dealing with source material which is a short story rather than a play (or written directly for the screen as Third Man was).
The story is a first person narrative (What is first person?)
Little dialog in the story – how will that translate into a film?
What about the characters in the story?
WHAT IS THE PLOT WHAT IS THE THEME? How do you derive the "subtext" from the "text"?
The Film: Rear Window
Differences between story and film: